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You show excellent talent!

I love this movie! Particularly, the plot had me in awe. It is very rare that you see a stick movie on NG with a plot besides Darkstick and the Rival series. Keep 'em coming!

Graphics - 8
I loved the graphics! This is definitely not out of date like you said it was.

Style - 9
You actually gave the stick people FACES! Plus, you used frame-by-frame explosions and fire of your own. VERY good originality!

Sound - 10
Although it would've worked nice with voices, the movie shows by quality, that they are unneeded. Even without sound, emotions are understood and the viewer can still tell how the characters feel! (See what I mean about FACES?! Yeah!)

Violence - 10
This is different from any other movie on NG. The weapons used are different and the theme shows a world of terror/war in a futuristic way. The way the character uses his...uhhh special light hand thingy (don't want to spoil it for people) is very original on ng too.

Interactivity - 8
I gave interactivity an 8 because you let the viewer read the dialogue at their own pace. But then you stop doing it later in the movie so what would have been a ten, became an eight. But still good. You also included a preloader. GOOD!

Humor - 0
NOT A BAD THING. I only gave humor a zero because it doesn't apply. N/A!

Overall, this movie is potentially a new classic series. Excellent work, I want to see more from you!

Way Above Average For A Beginner!

Excellent job man! You have EXTREMELY great potential. Is this REALLY your first animation in Flash?

I gave the graphics a 7 because the graphics were a bit mis-shaped but they were still excellent and I could tell that you actually put a lot of effort into making this!

I gave your style an 8 because you used that sweet oldskool type of tween animation! Brings back old NG memories.

I gave the sound a perfect ten because it is AMAZING how well you optimized the sound while still keeping the excellent quality of it and a small file size.

I gave violence a zero only because there is none. Not a bad thing, its just that there is none so it doesn't apply.

I gave the interactivity a 9 because you included a standard preloader and play button. The NG preloader is so convenient.

I gave humor a zero for the same reason that I gave violence a zero.

Overall, this is excellent Flash for a beginner! I really hope to see more of your work on NG in the future! Keep it up!

Very Nice Tutorial

I applaud you. Anybody who is willing to teach someone else to do something with patience should definitely do so! And you did a great job.
Anyway, to the review:

Graphics - 10
The graphics wouldn't get a ten for an actual feature length (for flash newayz) movie, but this is only a tutorial, and you kept it simple just like it should be.

Style - 10
I like that comic style you used in the tutorial. Not only is it cool looking, it keeps the viewer from closing it on the first few frames and saying "this is shite" So it will catch the viewer's attention and make it a bit more 'fun.'

Sound - 10
I gave it a ten because you used no sound and tutorials need no sound anyway so you knew that you didn't need to waste any file size on sound.

Violence - 0
I gave it a zero because there wasn't any. But thats a good thing in this case!

Interactivity - 10
You didn't do one of those tutorials that automatically go to the next step before the viewer is able to finish reading it. Instead, you provided NEXT and BACK buttons so the viewer could go through at his/her own pace. Also, you let them start over if needed when they get to the last step. More tutorials should be structured like yours is.

Humor - 0
I gave humor a zero because this is a tutorial, not some funny cartoon. But the zero is good in this case, considering its a tutorial. I gave humor a zero because you didn't put any in to sidetrack or confuse the viewer. Instead, you kept it straight to your point.

Overall - 10
This tutorial should be the example people use to structure other ones!

Great job!

EXTREME BABY! YEAH!

You are very talented at using a tablet! I can see you having your own television channel with your own content or your own site with content in the future. Keep using that tablet and who KNOWS what accomplishments you'll make! This was beyond belief for someone using a tablet for the FIRST TIME! I hope to see more from you and your TABLET!

teek-83 responds:

I dont know about extreme, but I've been drawing all my life so the tablet wasn't really any different. If you want to see more tablet stuff all my animation that I've posted are done with it, coz I am slack!

SWEET!

DUDE! MAKE A COMMERCIAL MAN!!!!! LIKE I SAID IN MY REVIEW FOR ART GONE WRONG, YOU ARE DEFINITELY COMMERCIAL MATERIAL FOR REDBULL, OR CORPORATIONS!

The most original work ever

THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST FLASH WORK IVE EVER SEEN! THE ORIGINALITY RULES ALL BABY!

Nice Animation

This animation is very nicely done. However, I suggest that you make it longer, add a preloader and some sounds, and that would make it EXTRA COOL! Nice work! Especially if this is your first try at Flash!

This should be a commercial! Seriously!

This piece of art work should be a commercial for like MTV or something! I know it sounds stupid coming from me, but it should! I've seen MTV commercials with that type of theme (the music in the background and the animation)

The graphics were extremely well done. They weren't over illustrated or haphazardly made. The graphics were well done with those cool rendering red grafitti effects!

Your style is very rarely seen in a Flash presentation! It really emulates that MTV commercial style! It is very original for Flash and should be an MTV commercial!

The sound was excellent. The music in the background set the mood for the movie very well. The sound effects were like that of a silent movie (The ones with sound effects but with a seldom amount of voices) and synced very well.

The violence was great! Many people will find that guns and blood get boring really fast. This movie wasn't all just fighting. The violence in this movie took place when and where it should have which added that little spice of "what's next?" to it.

The interactivity is good for a movie. The play button and the NG preloader to prevent from lagging due to traffic and slow connections and the replay button was included too.

The humor only appeared where it needed to be. Although there is very little humor, it isn't everyday that you see a grafitti design jump out at you!

This movie is truly a Newgrounds original and a very original piece of work.

Excellent Capture Of 16 and 32 Bit Games

I am a huge fan of Sonic.
This parody really brought back memories of the good old days of SEGA GENESIS!
The graphics weren't made by you, which lowered the graphics score to 8 instead of ten, but was 8 instead of 0 because it actually had graphics and captured the sprites extremely well.
I gave your style a 9 because of your sense of movement with the change of sprites to "animate" an action (i.e. Sonic being thrown around) and your familiarity with the actual SEGA games' animation.
The sounds were excellent! They matched the exact game sounds and were used the same way as well! However their originality dropped the score to a 9. But that is still excellent!
The violence was extremely well laidout. You used barely any blood, which shows that you know that the viewer wouldn't normally see Flash style blood or hardly even 16-bit graphic blood in the actual games.
The interactivity is perfect for a movie. The loader, the PLAY button, the REPLAY button, and even a bonus, a scene selection!
The humor was very well played for a parody. I hope to see much more!
Overall, this movie's score from me is a 9! It really captures the viewer almost as if the viewer were actually playing, except this isn't a game, but I think you know what I mean.

ParagonX9 responds:

Thanks for watching my movie!
WOW, THIS IS DEFINATELY ONE OF BEST REVIEWS I'VE EVER SEEN!
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NG-USERS! 'This is how a review should be!!!'

This could almost be considered stealing!

Don't use a stolen or whatever video copyright it is! You will get into trouble, and it is also not considered original or full of any effort. Try a different technique when making a movie.

GokuLV500 responds:

don't use stuff from the news

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